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Post by WeirdRaptor on Apr 14, 2022 16:39:34 GMT -6
I've finished a revised version of the prologue: Valkyrie Profile: Lenneth Novelization: I like, I like! I think we get a sense of place more clearly here. I also like italicizing the flashback; I think we get more of a sense that it’s distinct from the main narrative. Huh. Didn't see this one coming, but maybe I should have. According got the Traffic Graph on FF.net, the majority of my readers for this fic are from Norway and Germany.
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Post by WeirdRaptor on Apr 18, 2022 23:01:26 GMT -6
I've finished a revised version of the prologue: Valkyrie Profile: Lenneth Novelization: I like, I like! I think we get a sense of place more clearly here. I also like italicizing the flashback; I think we get more of a sense that it’s distinct from the main narrative. Chapter 2 is up.
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Post by WeirdRaptor on Apr 24, 2022 17:17:25 GMT -6
I like, I like! I think we get a sense of place more clearly here. I also like italicizing the flashback; I think we get more of a sense that it’s distinct from the main narrative. Yeah, sorry about the lack of italicized flashacks in the other version. An Archive of Our Own makes you program everything, yourself, and I literally have to program every line I want italicized, individually. So I copped out and used shorter breakers for that version. Fanfiction.net, for all its many flaws, has a writing program you can use just like Microsoft Word which makes editing, bolding, italicizing, and such much easier. So, I will be linking to FF.net from now on when I upload a chapter. And thank you again. Well, I figure since Tolkien used maps to help illustrate to his readers where everything takes place, I figure I should probably post a copy of the game's world map (Midgard) I've been using for reference to help make sense while writing. I've got a pair of doctored up copies I've made where I've added in every location from the first two games and one where I outline the regional territories of the fictional countries Lenneth visits. They'll be here if you ever feel like you need 'em, because heaven knows most VP players needed this map. Map with city and dungeon(level) locations: Map with territory borders:
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Post by WeirdRaptor on Apr 26, 2022 21:13:53 GMT -6
I've finished a revised version of the prologue: Valkyrie Profile: Lenneth Novelization: I like, I like! I think we get a sense of place more clearly here. I also like italicizing the flashback; I think we get more of a sense that it’s distinct from the main narrative. Chapter 4 is up.
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Post by WeirdRaptor on May 3, 2022 19:24:07 GMT -6
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Post by WeirdRaptor on May 11, 2022 22:49:19 GMT -6
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Post by WeirdRaptor on May 22, 2022 21:04:50 GMT -6
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Post by WeirdRaptor on May 31, 2022 0:42:15 GMT -6
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Post by WeirdRaptor on Jun 6, 2022 18:40:01 GMT -6
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Post by WeirdRaptor on Jun 13, 2022 21:54:03 GMT -6
Salzmark Chapter 9 is up. No new chapter next week, though. Will be busy. After that week-long hiatus, the fic will return at its normally semi-regular schedule.
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